Nogales Marketplace Shadows — Photo-Artistry by kenne
Handmade crafts in dark passageways
Damn me not I make a better fool
Just killing time, not looking to buy
In the tourists’ area of Nogales, Sonora
Where a horde of voices and unwed girls
Keep trying to get my attention as I
Think about a poem I will never write
Of delight that binds us from birth to death.
— kenne
I quite like those concluding four lines:
Where a horde of voices and unwed girls
Keep trying to get my attention as I
Think about a poem I may never write
Of delight that binds us from birth to death.
Excellent! I’d consider (you may have too) changing that “may never” to “will never” — even if you did write the poem!
Thanks for the suggestion.